You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to complain about the underwhelming dining experience we had at your restaurant yesterday. Let me briefly explain.
To elucidate I had taken my family out for Easter dinner at your restaurant "Impromptu" as it is a great place not only to have seafood but also offers a panoramic view of the sea. however, we were disappointed by our visit as the food we had ordered was stale and bland especially the starters and main course. Additionally, the dishes took a long time to be prepared and served. Lastly, the presentation of the dishes was not great in comparison to the last visit.
Although I have had a great dining experience in the past however this time we were heavily disappointed. Furthermore, I request you to inquire into this matter as negative reviews from your customers will impact the credibility as well as the business of your restaurant. In lieu of the negative dining experience, we have had yesterday I would need a 50 per cent discount voucher on my next meal at your restaurant.
I look forward to your response.
Yours sincerely
Saud
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
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...ward to your response. Yours sincerely Saud
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... your response. Yours sincerely Saud
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, furthermore, however, lastly, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88421052632 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12509279641 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5816724654 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3636363636 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185354134479 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606635198409 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432775772463 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939933900428 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395638339002 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.