You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter:
explain why you were at the restaurant
describe the problems
write about the action you want the manager to take
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
My name is Pallvi Singla. I have been writing this letter to express my immense dissatisfaction
regards to the food that we were served at your C-one restaurant at Brampton location on second of
June.
our all near and dears were with us to celebrate our son's first birthday. We were excited to
celebrate this day. So, decided and book a party hall at your place and gave them a list of foods
to prepare during the party.
In the beginning, everything was going very well. Starting from cake ceremony to the starter.
However, when it came to serve the dinner, it was so awful and oily. Even though, we felt some of
the dishes were taste sour. That means they were not fresh. So, none of our relatives ate
properly. Unfortunately, we had to waste the whole food because of the bad taste.
At the end, we just felt disappointed and shammed because of the food. Now, we really think we
deserve to get a large amount of discount on our next visit. I am looking forward for a prompt
action on this issue.
Yours truly
Pallvi Singla
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...er to express my immense dissatisfaction regards to the food that we were served ...
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...aurant at Brampton location on second of June. our all near and dears were wit...
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...pton location on second of June. our all near and dears were with us to cele...
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... sons first birthday. We were excited to celebrate this day. So, decided and book...
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... first birthday. We were excited to celebrate this day. So, decided and book a party ...
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...your place and gave them a list of foods to prepare during the party. In the b...
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...place and gave them a list of foods to prepare during the party. In the beg...
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...l and oily. Even though, we felt some of the dishes were taste sour. That means t...
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... oily. Even though, we felt some of the dishes were taste sour. That means they...
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...not fresh. So, none of our relatives ate properly. Unfortunately, we had to waste...
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...resh. So, none of our relatives ate properly. Unfortunately, we had to waste the who...
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...use of the food. Now, we really think we deserve to get a large amount of discoun...
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...visit. I am looking forward for a prompt action on this issue. Yours truly Pa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, really, second, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72251308901 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36924734206 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675392670157 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.73080919 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.375 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.9375 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.29896907216 279% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130172221493 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392270564126 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438866816574 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0394473878165 0.12726935374 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471250121834 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.