You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company.
Write to the airline and explain what happened.
Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it.
Find out what they are going to do about it.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter to get update regarding my lodge report about my suitcase that I lost in your plane. I took flight at 11 a.m. from Chandigarh Airport to Goa on 23rd October.
My flight number is MH1231 Indigo airlines. I remembered I keep my suitcase in the overhead bin of my seat C11 when flight is ready to takeover. I was tired and I sleep for a while and within 6 hour flight reached at Goa Airport. When I opened the bin my suitcase was not there. Fortunately, there was one officer who helped me to ledge my report and he assured me that he will look into this matter personally. It has been one week passed, but I have heard nothing yet.
The suitcase that I lost was skybags suitcase with silver logo. It was made of pure leather material and had one big pocket on outside. It contains my presentation documents and some legal documents relates to my company. Further, I have to submit all my documents in our officer before 30 November.
Please kindly look into this matter personally. If I will unable to present these documents on time then my boss terminate me from my job. Could you please locate my suitcase before give time?
I look forward to your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 231, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n 6 hour flight reached at Goa Airport. When I opened the bin my suitcase was not th...
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Line 15, column 49, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...indly look into this matter personally. If I will unable to present these document...
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Line 21, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mpt response. Yours faithfully, Aman
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, regarding, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47095123384 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613333333333 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9524129311 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.8823529412 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2352941176 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41176470588 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161552284232 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610641869971 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517401814629 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920852209077 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247192659812 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.51 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.