You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost.
You have still heard nothing from the airline company.
Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.
Dear Philippine Airlines,
I am Dennise Alexandre M. Ariota, writing for my concern about my suitcase that was lost. Until now, I have not heard yet about my suitcase.
My family and I travelled by your airline last week, April 28, 2017, Friday at 6:30 pm with a plane no. AB123 at the Ninoy Aquino International Airport bound to Canada. When we arrived in Canada's airport, we got immediately the suitcase of my mom, dad and brother but sadly, my suitcase is not there. We waited there for an hour, hoping that my suitcase was just late to load in the suitcase counter but unfortunately my suitcase was not yet loaded and another plane arrived. Because of tiredness we just decided to report it to the airline and go home.
I wrote a letter to your airline because it is already one week passed and I have still heard nothing about my suitcase. My suitcase is 200 cm in height and 180 cm in width. It is red and has a hello kitty design in it. Have 4 wheels and it is rotating 360 dresses. My suitcase is full of dresses and shoes for my everyday use.
I hope that you could find my suitcase immediately and report it to me. Thank you for your kindness consideration. God Bless.
Respectfully Yours,
Dennise
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54504504505 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54512476954 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585585585586 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5234589355 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.0625 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.875 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 4.34317383033 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249760597944 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764032859381 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643636288476 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130940411594 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674407768737 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.