You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company.Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do abou

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You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company.
Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.

Dear Sir/Madam,
I writing to inquire about my lost suitcase. I took flight Paris to Baku on 7th September and the Flight Number was 22331. When we arrived, I could not find my suitcase. Explanation of airport officer clarified that the baggage will be sent to Baku with the next flight on 9th September and it will be on my location on that date, while I have not received it.
If you need more information, it should be mentioned that, it is a dark blue suitcase which is made by pure leather and a metal handle. Besides outer characters, it contains some clothes, one laptop and a Rado watch, which costs aroud 8000 $.
Although I have registered the lost item ten days ago, I receive no data about where it is and how long it takes to receive. I really dissatisfied with the customer service and hope you could follow it and inform me.
I am looking forward to hearing your kind reply.

Sincerely Yours
Soulmaz

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
Dear Sir/Madam, I writing to inquire about my lost suitca...
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: CURRENCY[2]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$8000'.
Suggestion: $8000
...top and a Rado watch, which costs aroud 8000 $. Although I have registered the lost i...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... kind reply. Sincerely Yours Soulmaz
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, really, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57228915663 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47782665692 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686746987952 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4379594839 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112504086628 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416828144637 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0243339965122 0.0603063233224 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0539592524457 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00184116796474 0.0580467560999 3% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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