You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend.In your letter:Explain why you are selling the television.Describe the television.Suggest a date when your friend can come and see
Dear Raja,
Hope you are in high sprite. In our last meeting at city centre club house, you mentioned about you plan to buy a similar big 80 inch TV like I have at my house. I am writing this letter to inform you that I intent to sell my eighty inch T.V owing to moving out of Ranchi and settling to Delhi. In Delhi, accommodation has already been confirmed by the company and it is two bedroom house in central Delhi and unfortunately, I would not be able to have separate theatre room where I could install this T.V. Moreover, room sizes are comparatively smaller than here so it would not make sense to use in the small room.
I bought this LED two years kand its build is popular TV maker bland Sony. The captivating feature is that I can connect to multiple mobiles and show output in different sections of TV. Besides, it will be under warranty until 2021. The other accessories like remote, wall stand and wires are in proper condition.
If you still have a plan to procure big theater television and also willing to buy second hand then you may visit my house on coming weekends i.e. 23rd September or 24th September. Do not forget to bring your family as my children enjoy enthralling company of your family.
With Love,
Ranga
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Raja, Hope you are in high sprite. In our last...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: V
... that I intent to sell my eighty inch T.V owing to moving out of Ranchi and settl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48898678414 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41466760675 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.700440528634 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.6777085214 44.8134815571 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6363636364 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195083287791 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616186606089 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636121247026 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118926569057 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078055335943 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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