Dear Mr. John,
I am writing this letter to inform you that, I want to take a Linux course and this course will help me a lot to do for developing the Internet of Things products for Home Automation System.
I will explain in brief, As you know I promoted as a Embedded Application Engineer in last week. To make new products and for the purpose of design verification knowledge on Linux device drivers is necessary. So, I am very enthusiastic to learn Linux Device Drivers which will be give more boost up to new era designs. I am taking this course in Texas Instrumentations company, I hope I will get the brief information about Linux Drivers and the course will be starting on 15th October 2019 and class timings are Morning 8:30 to 11 A.M. Saturday and Sundays are closed. As you know, Our company timings are Morning 9:30 to 6:00 P.M. So, Can you Adjust my work timings from 11 to 7 P.M.
I am very grateful, If you are an adjust my work timings and I will get a positive reply from you.
Yours sincerely,
Bhanu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ain in brief, As you know I promoted as a Embedded Application Engineer in last w...
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Line 5, column 258, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... very enthusiastic to learn Linux Device Drivers which will be give more boost up...
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Line 5, column 527, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 2019 and class timings are Morning 8:30 to 11 A.M. Saturday and Sundays are clos...
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Line 5, column 617, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou know, Our company timings are Morning 9:30 to 6:00 P.M. So, Can you Adjust my ...
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Line 5, column 689, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Adjust my work timings from 11 to 7 P.M. I am very grateful, If you are an adjust...
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Line 7, column 32, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...P.M. I am very grateful, If you are an adjust my work timings and I will get a positi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, in brief, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48148148148 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57152655114 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587301587302 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.9188610912 44.8134815571 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 76.5299724578 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 16.8248392259 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264047932018 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109208916305 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723448219067 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171999644941 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243397555049 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.