You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Dear Manager,
I am writing to make a formal complain about Dell 1350 laptop I bought from your shop. The keys and the power buttons are not working properly and this is giving me a setback in my work.
I bought the latest model of Dell laptop from your Mower branch last week Wednesday and to my horror, the keys and the power buttons have seized when typing or when booting the system. I have to press the keys so hard or several times to make it work, in fact it has totally stopped working now.
However, my boss has given me a 3-days ultimatum to submit my work or I get fired. This is not a funny matter because I am grounded now and I could not work, I have loads of documents to print as well.
In view of this , I want an immediate replacement within the next 48 hours or might be forced to take a legal action against your company , should I be sacked. I will also want a compensation for all the troubles I have been subjected to.
Yours faithfully,
Mary Jane
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nts to print as well. In view of this , I want an immediate replacement within ...
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Line 9, column 138, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...take a legal action against your company , should I be sacked. I will also want a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, well, as to, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28342245989 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25687270948 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620320855615 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.4761370916 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14449179985 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616864821787 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025125905229 0.0603063233224 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813590708236 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0134608233321 0.0580467560999 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.