Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to complain about an HP computer monitor that I purchased from your store on Jun15th, reference number: 852345. This computer also has 2 years warranty.
I work from home as a computer engineer, hence it is mandatory for me to have a good quality of computer systems. The monitor I purchased was working alright for some time, however, all of a sudden the display started to appear blurred abruptly. Also, the monitor is making an unusual sound which is worrisome. I also tried to restart the computer but it did not resolve the issue.
This is causing huge inconvenience to me as I am not able to save the work while I restart the computer, I have a deadline to deliver this project by the end of the week and I am afraid I will not be able to complete it as the monitor is not working properly. This is not only causing distress but also hampering my work.
I would really appreciate if you can replace the faulty monitor immediately or repair it since it is still under warranty. I can bring it to the store this evening or you can send an agent to pick it from my home.
Yours faithfully
Dave
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to complain abo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, really, so, still, while, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44019138756 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53072509223 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569377990431 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.2013305413 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3636363636 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164561444333 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664925960416 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370835260711 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857652023555 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00908527167201 0.0580467560999 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.