You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
• explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
• say how your work could be done while you are away
• ask for his/her help in arranging it
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to seek your permission for allowing me to work in the headquarters of the company in America for six months. I would like to mention the reason behind it in detail.
Since, our company is planning to expand the global reach of the products if I get the opportunity to work in the headquarters of the organisation it will definitely help me to enhance my skills and expertise. Moreover, it will not only allow me to gain knowledge of trade strategies, regulations and tariffs but also the products’ global market trends deeply
I have talked to Shweta junior sales manager. She agreed to take on my responsibilities during my absence. Furthermore, I shall check my emails and shall be available for emergency calls. Once I get back to work, I would endeavour to work extra hours to catch up on anything I missed.
I would need your support to get the necessary approvals and email confirmation and if you could assist me to make arrangements for travel and accommodations.
I hope you will consider me suitable for working in the company’s head office. I look forward to hearing from you
Yours sincerely,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 85, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...king in the company's head office. I look forward to hearing from you Your...
^
Line 15, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou Yours sincerely, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92039800995 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07159037938 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621890547264 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.1144264236 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287740469053 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10659423039 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873947529311 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160254922556 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859584224571 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.