You work for an international company and would like to work at its head office for six months.
Dear Mrs. James,
I am writing to inform you, about my intentions to work at the company's Main Office in Spain. I actually saw the advert, in the maiden edition of the company's monthly magazine, advertising the post of Assistant Project Manager.
To start with, I have interest in working at the company's central office in Spain because I just got admitted into the University of Spain, to do an Advance Certification in Project Management for 4 months. Working abroad will make it easy to combine schooling cum working. In addition, I speak Spanish fluently, so language will not be a barrier.
Moreover, I have discussed with Harriet, my colleague and my job-share mate, and she has agreed to take on my duty as we both double as Project Officers. She will now work full-time instead of part-time.
Kindly, help me in securing this job as it will be an added advantage to the company when I finish the certification program and a bonus to my portfolio.
Yours sincerely,
Mary Jones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, moreover, so, in addition, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87134502924 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79057072596 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672514619883 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5167203397 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5555555556 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223467807651 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720538581407 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888812038996 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125166120272 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808088577326 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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