You work for an international company. Recently your job has changed and you believe that more training is needed. Write a letter to your manager and say
- How has your job changed?
- Describe a type of training you will need.
- Suggest the arrangements incorporating training and your work.
Respected Sir/Madam,
My name is kirti and I am writing this letter to make a request in regards to my new role at this company.
Recently, I have been promoted with the latest responsibilities and position of api coder -an advanced programming interface owing to my splendid performance on the certain previous project.
As you know, from the last 2 years am working as a web developer in your organization; as a result, I have merely substantial command over coding and database connectivity. However, because of recent placement, I will have to procure fundamental knowledge on api creation. Competency in these concepts will aid me to understand the requirement of our client project adequately. Therefore, I wish to attend a training session for these programs for the next three months.
As for the training schedule, I will be available from 2:00 to 3:00 pm which is our break time. But I can also adjust the time according to the trainer’s schedule, which will not bother my current work, since I will work late in the evening in order to complete my running tasks on the depicted deadline.
I hope for a prompt and a positive response from your side.
Yours faithfully,
kirti
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...m writing this letter to make a request in regards to my new role at this company. recentl...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Recently
...ards to my new role at this company. recently, I have been promoted with the latest r...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
.... As you know, from the last 2 years am working as a web developer in your orga...
^^
Line 15, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...your side. Yours faithfully, kirti
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, therefore, as for, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0396039604 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01983444229 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653465346535 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.656086819 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.8 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188120557795 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725758548165 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413685028421 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689420540786 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532624264382 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.