Dear sir or madam,
I am Manish Sachani, working in company's Vesu branch, Surat as manager. I am writing this letter to seek your permission regarding my interest to join a training course which I have seen recently in newspapers advertisements.
I have seen one advertisement in local newspaper today that one training course will be organizing on 28th September 2019 for one week from 10:00am to 5:00pm and it costs 5000rs per person including one time food and two time tea. Various experienced professionals from many states will give their lectures on business management. It improves ideas and skills of person which I found very useful for me as well as our company.I believe that the course will improve my knowledge and efficiency.
I hope you will understand the importance of course for me and company and allow me to attend such great opportunity. Also, if possible you could arrange my joining fees and give me unpaid leave for week.
I am looking forward for your immediate positive revert.
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...ees and give me unpaid leave for week. I am looking forward for your immediat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, well, of course, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99411764706 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78110903671 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682352941176 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.0238914627 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.125 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 4.34317383033 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353029857382 0.216113520407 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128572626666 0.0766984524023 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565983411798 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180634758402 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340746270654 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.