Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to show my extreme interest in doing a course, which I saw an advertisement of in yesterday's newspaper.
It is a 2-month training regarding "Prevention techniques dealing with Cyber Crime" and is commencing from 1st of August. The slot I am planning to attend will be after working hours. The entire study costs for Rs15000/- and requires the applicationts to book prior by paying some amount within next week.
Currently, I am staying as a paying guest and as you know the rents and travelling expenses in this city are not that affordable. So, could you possibly provide me with an advance amount of Rs30000/- and that money can be deducted with reasonable installments per month from my salaries.
Attending the course, can help me aquire certain skills that can be really beneficial in understanding network security. I can also learn to tackle cyber threats and design strong policies for the applications that are deployed online.
It would be kind enough of you help me with this and am looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Nupur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to show my extr...
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Line 10, column 54, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...ind enough of you help me with this and am looking forward to hear from you soon. ...
^^
Line 10, column 73, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...elp me with this and am looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours Sincerely, N...
^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hear from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Nupur
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, really, regarding, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01063829787 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89113238133 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664893617021 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4993506439 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208680098438 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733665358879 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359717803069 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974341329131 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288150148509 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.