Dear Sir,
Greetings of the day. I am Bhumika Suryavanshi, working as an HR professional since last 12 years. With reference to the advertising mail received from your side related to the 12th HR annual seminar at Malaysia, I would be interested participating in this HR seminar for my knowledge enhancement in HR field.
I am intending to write this letter to get the insight and highlights of the program. I would be grateful if you can share the brochure of the program containing the information relate to the exact date of commencement, No of days, the participants, the subject listed along with the cost involved in the participation fees. As I understand, being foreigner I would be in need of Visa to attend this seminar at the venue, It would be a great help providing succinct on visa process if required from my side.
Being a stranger to this country, I would prefer if you can share the accommodation facilities available along with the type and cost of the meals.
Looking into the popularity of the program, I feel you must be getting the flow of responses for the registration. Your timely response to my query can help me to take the quick decision on my registration before the seats get exhausted.
Awaiting for your prompt reply
Regards
Bhumika Suryavanshi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: Now
...late to the exact date of commencement, No of days, the participants, the subject ...
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Line 5, column 448, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to provide' or 'provide'.
Suggestion: to provide; provide
... at the venue, It would be a great help providing succinct on visa process if required fr...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
...ion before the seats get exhausted. Awaiting for your prompt reply Regards Bhumika S...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, i feel, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86877828054 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9888855902 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574660633484 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.2992890955 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23304185095 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811116552674 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564308686132 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112026090728 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518432668384 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.