Dear Sir,
I am Shwatank, the father of Susan, who is a ninth-standard student in your school. I am writings this letter to let you know that, as you are exploring parents, who could accompany students on the international trip to India, I would like to nominate myself.
There are two main reasons that are strong enough to prove my eligibility for this task. Firstly, I am a native Indian speaker, I can easily act as a translator between children and the Indian people. This would be easy for schoolchildren while their stay in India. In addition, I have spent my childhood in India, I can take kids around and show them places of their interests.
Moreover, I am aware of Indian cultures and traditions. Thus, I will make sure that each student gets involved in the local activities and learn the culture.
Plus, chiefly, I would also ensure their safety and security, along with this I would make this sure that they have adequate sleep and a healthy diet on their entire vacation.
Finally, if you concur with this application, I would like to get some basic information from you like the number of students traveling, the departure date, and the agenda of travel.
I am hoping to receive a positive response from you.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77209302326 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67421232774 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613953488372 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6318360666 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2727272727 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 4.34317383033 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15512072065 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522779495741 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662413120505 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801113211247 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715832657147 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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