Your colleague from a different town is coming next month and you are moving out of your current accommodation. Write a letter to the colleague to recommend they move into your house and say
– Why are you moving to another house?
– Describe your present accommodation.
– Explain why it will suit your colleague.
Dear ABC
Hope you are hale and hearty.
I am writing this letter, with reference to your letter which I got yesterday. I am very excited after reading your letter, that you are coming to my town. In the flipping decade, we haven’t met, I request you to please stay with me as we get enough time to goof up.
My current residential place is quite far from our office vicinity and doesn’t have all the modern necessities. You will be happy to know that I have purchased a new place which is ubiquitous. Dawn & Dusk is incredible at the time at the facade.
I would suggest you please stay with me in my new apartment, as the location is at the walking distance of 5 minutes and surrounded by bustling stores, café & gym.
I hope that you will accept my recommendation and we will be able to spend some time.
Best Regards
XYZ
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- Some people think the air travel should be restricted because it causes environment pollution. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and relevant examples. 32
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 14, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to spend some time. Best Regards XYZ
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 702.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55844155844 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63357799777 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7974873579 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16269160222 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650685752049 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070876763096 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813875694608 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618427500068 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.