Your friend had made a plan for you two to see a movie together but you cannot join him. You have found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you cannot go anymore
Say who can go instead of you
Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear Diksha,
Hope you are doing well ? I am very delighted and thankful to you as you have invited me for a movie. It has been long time we never met.
To be honest, I am writing to apologize you as I will not be able to come to see you as I have a meeting on Sunday. My boss has chosen me to lead this meeting. I was very excited about our plan, but it’s all faded when I heard about this meeting.
As you are new in our town, you donot have any friend except me. I know you are very curious about this movie. Moreover, it’s a movie of your favourite star. Please don’t drop your plan because of me. I have one solution. There is one of my close friend who is free and ready to come along with you.
Her name is Reena. She mostly like you which is the biggest reason of my friendship with her. She is very entertaining and knows this city really well. Also, you get opportunity to make new friend. Isn’t good. I suggest, you should go with her and explore your day with some new conversations and activities. Again, I am sorry for not making that day. Definitely, we will plan something excited in next week.
Looking forward to hear from you.
Best wishes
Geet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Diksha, Hope you are doing well ? I am very deli...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...long with you. Her name is Reena. She mostly like you which is the biggest rea...
^^
Line 9, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g and knows this city really well. Also, you get opportunity to make new friend. ...
^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...xcited in next week. Looking forward to hear from you. Best wishes Geet
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28761061947 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21206794216 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615044247788 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.13402061856 186% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6804123711 166% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2256971324 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 46.1428571429 76.5299724578 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.7619047619 16.8248392259 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.04761904762 4.34317383033 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 7.41237113402 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374441364927 0.216113520407 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972884022163 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926993912814 0.0603063233224 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217040727486 0.12726935374 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759703828272 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.2 8.37731958763 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 7.45979381443 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.42 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.95 7.59969072165 78% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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