Dear Shain,
It's giving me immense pleasure while writing this. First of all, Congratulations!! for your dream house. I am well aware about the toil u had put to make your dream come true.
I am sure now you have started having goosebumps thinking about the present i bought for you. Yes!! You are guessing right. It's a wall clock which i promised to you.
All the friends and I are planning to come to your place. I think, that would be the best time to give you the present as, we can not only see your new house but can also have a small get together. So, be ready for the party and if you have other plans please let me know.
Well, I bought this gift for you because you wanted to have it since long time and because of the budget you weren't able to buy this. And do you remember, that I promised to you that when you will buy new home I ll give you it as present? So here i am keeping my promise.
See you soon!!
- You are going to take a vacation soon and want your friend to go with you Write a letter to your friend asking him her to come with you In your letter you should Tell him her why you want the holiday vacation Describe your plan Invite him her to go with y 73
- The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing Do you agree or disagree 73
- You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service Say when and how you ordered the cheque book Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the man 73
- Some people believe that price is the only consideration when buying something Do you agree or disagree with this statement Give your opinion and include relevant examples 73
- You are unable to attend a farewell party of a colleague at work Write a letter to him her In your letter you should say why you can t come give him her your best wishes suggest another time and place for you to meet 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...easure while writing this. First of all, Congratulations!! for your dream house. ...
^^
Line 2, column 85, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
... this. First of all, Congratulations!! for your dream house. I am well aware about...
^^^
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...g goosebumps thinking about the present i bought for you. Yes!! You are guessing ...
^
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... for you. Yes!! You are guessing right. Its a wall clock which i promised to you. ...
^^^
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you. Yes!! You are guessing right. Its a wall clock which i promised to you. All...
^^
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...guessing right. Its a wall clock which i promised to you. All the friends and I...
^
Line 6, column 70, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'longs'?
Suggestion: longs
...you because you wanted to have it since long time and because of the budget you were...
^^^^
Line 6, column 110, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
...long time and because of the budget you werent able to buy this. And do you remember, ...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t able to buy this. And do you remember, that I promised to you that when you wil...
^^
Line 6, column 232, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'presents'?
Suggestion: presents
...u will buy new home I ll give you it as present? So here i am keeping my promise. See ...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 249, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...me I ll give you it as present? So here i am keeping my promise. See you soon!!
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, while, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.06010928962 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10774597385 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612021857923 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2280672891 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.1538461538 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0769230769 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378940815576 0.216113520407 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131446699616 0.0766984524023 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668303715773 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220174170025 0.12726935374 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593947142559 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 70.7449484536 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.68 8.71597938144 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.8 7.59969072165 76% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 41.2886597938 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.