Your friends recently moved to a new city. You will also be moving to the same city. Write a letter to your friends and include:– Ask where to find a place to live– Tell them what type of place you’re looking for– Share some fun things you would l

Dear Tim,

Its been a long time that I wanted to write you a letter, however, I was extremely busy for the past one month. I hope you have settled in London and finding the city interesting. I am pleased to tell you that I have received my offer letter from the company where I applied for job of credit analyst and will be joining next month in London.

I was wondering if you could give some advice on the accommodation. My office will be on High Street and I am looking to shift to an apartment nearby. To be precise, I am not looking for a big apartment as my Company will be offering me a new house, but this will take some time. I am therefore happy to shift in a one bedroom apartment with a small living area and kitchen for initial 2 months.

Also I am glad that there will be one week's time prior to joining so was thinking if you can take a day or two off and we can plan to explore the city. I have heard there are many interesting amusement park and Zoos which we can visit.

Let me know if you happen to get any quotes for the apartment so that I can shortlist few of them and finalize.

See you soon.

Best wishes

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...can you please advise of few apartments near by. To be precise, I am not looking for a ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ea and kitchen for initial 2 months. Also I am glad that there will be one weeks ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one week', 'a week', or simply 'weeks'?
Suggestion: one week; a week; weeks
...s. Also I am glad that there will be one weeks time prior to joining the organisation ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to visiting'.
Suggestion: to visiting
... I was wondering if we can look forward to visit London Eye and take Cruise on Thames Ri...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can shortlist few of them and finalize. See you soon. Your loving friend.
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.13065326633 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21461568067 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603015075377 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.960800647 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232027490404 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102047354798 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498821751488 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114413726952 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361876888608 0.0580467560999 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.