Dear Sir or Madam,
I believe that sports complex plays a vital role in every communities' life. I have been informed that you are considering to shutdown the sport facility in our town.
This facility is so important for my family members and also for all of my friends. I should mention that me and my brother use the body building center 3 days a week. In addition, my mother and my sister signed up for the yoga session on leisure complex and it helped them to reduce their daily stresses and become healthy and happy. We usually use the swimming pool with my friends where it would help us to feel refreshed and be prepared for everyday's routine.
In every society, having a sport center would have many benefits for it's people living there. Apart from that, it also would be beneficial for the adults who are full of energy an need a place to discharge it. Furthermore, it gathers all the people from different ages in one roof and help them to be healthy. Having a healthy society would be useful for the whole country as well.
There would be many side effects of sports facilities being closed. The most important aspects of that would be the increase in amount of crimes. Without such places, adults are likely to commit crimes and join a dangerous groups. The other fact would be relating to the health of people in community. They use these facilities to be healthy and happy.
To sum up, It would be appreciated if you could postpone or cancel the closure order as the sports center have many beneficial for our community.
Yours faithfully,
John smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'communities'' or 'community's'?
Suggestion: communities'; community's
...rts complex plays a vital role in every communities life. I have been informed that you are...
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Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: GOT_SHUTDOWN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to shut down'?
Suggestion: to shut down
... been informed that you are considering to shutdown the sport facility in our town. This...
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Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...l for the adults who are full of energy an need a place to discharge it. Furthermo...
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Line 9, column 224, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'group'?
Suggestion: group
...y to commit crimes and join a dangerous groups. The other fact would be relating to th...
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Line 14, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...munity. Yours faithfully, John smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, well, apart from, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 937.175257732 139% => OK
No of words: 280.0 206.0 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66071428571 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38050918494 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582142857143 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.457158348 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7647058824 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 4.34317383033 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105206762822 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389783689822 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04147826497 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616908707604 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032127387395 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.