Dear Mr. ABC,
I hope you are doing great. It is a shame that we do not know each other very well and I would like to apologise for that. I am writing this letter in response to your complaint letter that you sent me yesterday about the noise from my flat. I sincerely apologise for the inconvenience and humbly ask for your forgiveness.
With the concern about home safety, my wife and I decided to install a few smoke detectors in our flat, especially after we saw a devastating fire in our neighbourhood lately. we bought the devices from an online store and started to install and test the gadgets last sunday. To ensure that the sound of the fire alarm is loud enough and everyone in the house would notice it, we tested the devices for about 30 minutes. Although the testing took place at midday last sunday, my wife and I are terribly sorry that your child’s nap was interrupted.
I really regret the event and request your forgiveness. Please accept this box of chocolate as a token of my deepest regret for the inconvenience. we will be more careful next time.
Yours sincerely,
XYZ
- You have received a bill from a mobile phone company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for international call Write a letter to company Complaining about this Giving your reasons Asking for bill to be change 73
- Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets Other people prefer to do their food shopping online Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result Why do many working people not get enough exercise What can be done about this problem 56
- Corporal punishment has been practiced in family for a long time Nowadays many people strongly oppose it Discuss both sides and give your opinion 78
- You have been selected for a training course on computer skills that you cannot attend Write a letter to your employer and say Explain how this training course would help you Why won t you be able to attend it Suggest a way to have that training again 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ating fire in our neighbourhood lately. we bought the devices from an online store...
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Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...request your forgiveness. Please accept this box of chocolate as a token of my deepe...
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Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...y deepest regret for the inconvenience. we will be more careful next time. Your...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59595959596 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57561893071 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641414141414 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5380611263 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8333333333 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291113307524 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10521818229 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105574356782 0.0603063233224 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183374600809 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130715135023 0.0580467560999 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.