Your sibling has sent you a letter asking for an update on your life Write a letter to your sibling In your letter Describe what you did for your last birthday Ask for photos of your sibling s last holiday Talk about something you are looking forward to

Dear Bhumika,

Hope you are doing Good!!!

It has been a great pleasure to receive a letter from you , I was over the moon after reading the letter. It was great to know about your recent visit to Dubai where you have cherished every moment and i have been dying to see the pictures that you clicked on your holiday. You always has been an adventurer seeker and as you said you did skydiving along with desert safari which would have been an adrenaline experience.

Although yours passion cannot be matched but on my last birthday me and my friends went to Rishikesh. The experience of rafting got me all energised along with trekking to the near mountain got me thrilled and fall in love with the serenity of nature. As you know rafting was always on my bucket list, luckily we finally got time to pursue it and take my word you will love it as it is altogether. A different sport where you can be taken by surprise, hit by large waves while enjoying simultaneously amidst all this danger. For me it was the best trip i had and would love to take you with me.

With this recent successful tour now my next destination is Ladakh. Plan is to go there by bike experiencing the thrill of mountain roads while at the same time relaxing with cold breeze. I have started planning for same , will share details with you hopefully you can make this time so that we can have a trip together.

Yours Faithfuly,

Gunjan

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Average: 4.7 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...at pleasure to receive a letter from you , I was over the moon after reading the l...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'You' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...you clicked on your holiday. You always has been an adventurer seeker and as you sa...
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Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Although yours passion cannot be matched but on my last birthday me and my friend...
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Line 7, column 555, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...his danger. For me it was the best trip i had and would love to take you with me....
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Line 9, column 221, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...breeze. I have started planning for same , will share details with you hopefully ...
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Line 9, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g for same , will share details with you hopefully you can make this time so that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, while, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 259.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50193050193 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37902960443 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579150579151 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.0 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.9101318611 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1666666667 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258442258576 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994549367671 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803391816409 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137318071204 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081996242743 0.0580467560999 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.