As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.
Since the introduction of computer to the world, it has been improved and updated with features that can assist human with their activities, such as data entering, recording, and even teaching. Some argue that with increase utilisation of of computers in schools and universities, the existence of teachers in classroom became unnecessary. However, in my personal opinion, the role of teachers in classroom is crucial in educating students.
Firstly, computers were set up with numerous features and applications, most of them are relevant to education, however there are some applications that can distract students from studying. Programs such as MS Excel, Words, and Powerpoints are important for students, because not only it is useful in daily life, it is crucial for their future career. However, when internet and its browser are included in the computer, a 30-minutes assignment can be a 3-hours assignment due to distraction from browsing internet. Hence, the existence of teachers in the class is important so that they can help students to concentrate on their tasks.
Secondly, recent researches found that working in front of the screen for a long period will cause health problem, such as weary eyes, dizziness and so forth. Moreover, human are social being, it is important for them to maintain a physical social interaction each day. Long period of computer usage can cause weary eyes which will weaken the eyesight. In addition, weary eyes can also lead to dizziness, thus by having teachers in the classroom, students are able to take their eyes off the screen. Furthermore, teachers will also be able to satisfy the students need for social interactions and this will teach them how to communicate with others.
In summary, although there is an increasing trend of computers usage in schools and universities, the role of teacher remain relevant because teachers can assist them concentrate more in schools and provide necessary social interactions for students which also allow them to rest their eyes from computers
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-09 | Jass Ramgarhia | 78 | view |
| 2019-12-24 | phuongjiri | 78 | view |
| 2019-12-05 | Ehsan BAKHTIYARI | 73 | view |
| 2019-12-02 | shohruh.fayzulloyev | 73 | view |
| 2019-08-27 | M dios | 100 | view |
- Even though globalization affects the world’s economies in a positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss. 60
- Many people believe that companies and individuals should pay to clean up the environment in proportion to the amount of pollution they have produced. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion and examples. 87
- The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 80
- Machine translation MT is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans Do you agree or disagree 68
- Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about the private lives of famous people. We know what they eat, where they buy their clothes and who they love. We also often see pictures of them in private situations.Is it appropriate for a magazine or new 80
with increase utilisation of of computers
with the increased utilisation of computers
not only it is useful in daily life,
not only is it useful in daily life,
due to distraction from browsing internet.
due to the distraction from browsing internet.
the role of teacher remain relevant
the roles of teacher remain relevant
Sentence: In summary, although there is an increasing trend of computers usage in schools and universities, the role of teacher remain relevant because teachers can assist them concentrate more in schools and provide necessary social interactions for students which also allow them to rest their eyes from computers
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to computers and usage
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 164 200
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 326 350
No. of Characters: 1668 1500
No. of Different Words: 164 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.249 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.117 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.719 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 121 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 101 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 80 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.077 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.976 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.846 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.366 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.578 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.138 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5