One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
The medical sciences are progressing with leaps and bounds in this jet age of the 21st century. As a result of this people are enjoying good health and live longer. As the case with many issues this happening has cons and pros. However, I believe the merits of increased life span is exceeding their demerits.
Multifarious points shore up the advantages of this phenomenon. First and foremost, when people live longer, they will enjoy their life more. In other words, people will have more time to spend with their families and friends. In addition they probably have extra time to travel and see places they could not have time to see it before. Moreover, some people with certain jobs could benefit their society even when they are older. For example, Doctors, Politicians and Teachers. A newly graduated Doctor definitely will gain knowledge and experience from an old professional one. Therefore, increased life expectancy is beneficial for both the individuals and the whole society.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks for prolonging people’s life. Firstly, increasing life span of the people will requires astronomical budget that will ultimately put extra burden on the economy of the country. As this budget will spend on medical equipment, hospitals and care for elderly people. Furthermore, some people could argue that, by increasing the life of an old, diseased person, we will prolonging his/her suffer and pain. As the case with patient suffer from terminal illness, we just increase his/her suffer and misery.
In conclusion, it is clear from aforementioned points that, increased life span has positive and negative aspects. However, I still believe that, advantages of this trend far outweigh the disadvantages.
- Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.To what extent do you agree with this statement? 50
- Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 70
- The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the tears 1990 and 2010.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 40
- The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003 2012 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 75
Sentence: Firstly, increasing life span of the people will requires astronomical budget that will ultimately put extra burden on the economy of the country.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to will and requires
we will prolonging his/her suffer and pain.
we will be prolonging his/her sufferings and pains.
flaws:
No. of Words: 282 350
No. of Different Words: 158 200
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 282 350
No. of Characters: 1416 1500
No. of Different Words: 158 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.098 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.021 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.552 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 99 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 71 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.842 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.158 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.684 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.284 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.469 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.079 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5