Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In the last few decades there has been considerable debate over possible ways to increase the level of public health. There are a lot of arguments about whether we should seek to promote exercise equipment or it is better to look for other options that could positively contribute to people's health. Generally, in my point of view, both attitudes are useful enough to be pursued.
To begin with, some people put forward the view that the best solution to improve one's health condition is to provide more sports facilities. This is due to the fact that, nowadays, the majority of people have full-...
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