Gone on the days , in sophistication era , computer is one of the best invention of the 21 century . There are plenty invention like computer , laptop ,mobile phone and tablet so on . Today , technology is very fast . There are all age groups used it . There are many reasons behind it . I will dicuss my coming paragraph .
First of all ,nowadays all person used the Internet . Hence , Internet source unlimited provide the information and knowledge . After that, computer is very essential part of all human being because it used many time like bank, business, schools, university and mall so on.
Nevertheless , adolescence is the age group used of most the Internet . Therefore , these days are alots students used the online website . They are many website available like lelts , pte , spoken language of personality development and . Last but not the least , some believe that , computer are the best of the teenager . Otherwise , some time pupils do not afford high fees in the higher standard education . Then, computer give alots of information and increase knowledge day by day .
To sum up, today toddlers is very sharp mind . They is easily catch all the thing and they always time crusin about new thing learn in the life . Finally , there are no doubt Internet provide many thing . in my opinion, it is merit of the adolescence used right way .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, no doubt, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9865470852 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63447905305 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587443946188 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5027092069 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.5263157895 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.7368421053 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.05263157895 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 53.0 5.01903807615 1056% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0719442352445 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0255654421472 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496057400421 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0462965574251 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034755343826 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.48 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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