The aging population is good for business, the economy and society. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In many countries, especially in Japan, European and American countries have an increasing number of an aging population. Some people think that it is good for business, economy, and society, while others totally get disagree with the statement. In my opinion, Holding many of the aged population will be a threat to any country.
In one hand, the country who has experienced population have some benefits like they have the number of people with senior authority. They have a good understanding and knowledge about overcoming the crisis and provide enough guidance to manage well-being in the country. They provide assistance and adding up into the GDP of the country by moving out their businesses effectively. They can keep up the patience level and optimism at working place with maturity. They take responsibility and authority very seriously. They have lesser turnover rates.
On the other hand, It has many disadvantages which can be challenging<span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="which "></span> for a country. Many countries like India has a higher number of young population and have high staff which is the biggest competitive edge between the countries. Lack of potential adults has a drastic impact over the countries growth. The older employees do not acquire fast pace skills and capabilities easily. they even have so many health issues which can be disgraceful for them to focused on work. The production capacity was of aged people much lesser than younger workers. They can get depressed and get lazy due to their growing age. people of the aged group take so much time to complete the work on time, caused delays and overlapping of work.
In conclusion, the aged population not survived in a few next years of changing world, where young talents are necessary to fulfill the competition gap and for achieving the countries growth and power among the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25573770492 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37382306512 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583606557377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0322876196 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0555555556 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9444444444 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138528171845 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415548339637 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510938858119 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100418640574 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701324114005 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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