Many people believe that the development of economy has negative effect on the environment of the world, which makes it more and more polluted. This essay will present the possible causes of this issue as well as the appropriate remedies to deal with it.
The problem is attributable 2 main reasons. One cause could be that the economic zones are becoming more popular. In fact, various factories are built without proper waste treatment systems, which lead to exhaust fumes in the air and serious pollution in the water by industrial waste. Secondly, agricultural activities are mainly responsible for the pollution of water and soil. More environments and ecosystems are destroyed to make space for the crops and people use pesticides and herbicides to protect their farming. These are made from chemical substances which mean they will less be absorbed into the soil or water. Besides, agricultural trash thrown indiscriminately is also major environmental problem.
Various measures can be taken in order to address the problem. Firstly, the government should collaborate with authorities on regularly inspecting the company’s waste treatment systems to ensure them meet the stringent standards. Moreover, the government should impose strict penalties for the firms violating to deter them. Secondly, the government should raise awareness for people on using agricultural chemical properly. In addition, authorities can organize the training sessions on how to dispose of agricultural waste as well as the severe impacts of this waste on the environment and public health.
In conclusion, the pollution of environment which results from the economic development, and there are several actions that can be taken to tackle this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5092936803 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96755347029 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591078066914 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7747398423 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243056933301 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729690700135 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800458664524 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164414095521 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750557388593 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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