The health problems have become frequent and superfluous in last few decades. The speculation is that the situation will worsen in the future and health standards will become seriously compromised. While there are many factors that have led to this, the situation is certainly grave and future generations will suffer immensely due to this.
It could be argued that due to major breakthroughs in medical sciences, the life expectancy has improved as compared to past. The developments of pharmacological drugs and vaccines have eliminated many deadly diseases and people are able to live longer lives. In Asia, for example, thousands of children used to die due to small pox in first year of their lives. However, the vaccination prepared by Robert Koch has now successfully eliminated small pox from the world. Moreover, it seems that better sanitary conditions have stopped epidemics that used to happen in the past and killed large proportion of population in single outbreak.
However, living longer lives than past generations does not ensure better health standards. Since masses did not have access to therapeutic options, they focused on preventive measures and lived cautiously. Their diet consisted of natural foods and outdoor lifestyle involved massive amount of physical labor. However, the situation is completely opposite now. As public has access to safe and easy treatment options, it has become careless in its lifestyle choices. The consumption of fast food has massively increased and presence of physical activity is negligible. Resultantly, people are becoming victim of obesity, hormonal imbalances and diabetes in their early ages. These problems will worsen with advancing times because younger generation is either too busy or too careless to take care of its health. Statistics indicate that childhood obesity will become doubled in America in next ten years, creating a serious fall in health standards of the country. Moreover, the dependency of youngsters on computers and other machines is increasing with every passing day. This development alone is enough to eliminate any chances of fitness from their lives and they are likely to suffer from cardiovascular risks frequently in future.
Although it seems progress by mankind has successfully delayed death, in reality, quality of life has declined significantly. The health problems are growing and likely to become impossible to control in future. Therefore, it will be unquestionably correct to state that health standards will be severely compromised in future and next generation will be unhealthier than the current one.
- With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the Internet. What potential problems may this trend lead to? What solutions can you suggest to deal with it? 84
- Some children find learning history at school very exciting, but many others think it is very boring. In what ways can history be brought to life for all school children? 84
- The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.What are the causes of this continued rise?Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity? 84
- Some people think that the main factors influencing a child s development these days are things such as tv friends and music Others believe that family still remains very important Discuss both views and give your opinion 69
- As people live longer and longer, the idea of cloning human beings in order to provide spare parts is becoming a reality. The idea horrifies most people, yet it is no longer mere science fiction. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2208.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 405.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45185185185 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87416952877 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57037037037 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 699.3 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9950409124 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.363636364 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4090909091 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.68181818182 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135484888775 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358533469005 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322928426966 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846963651774 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243895844608 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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