The best way to travel is travel in a group led by a tour guide. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Since the beginning of 21st century more folks have started to explore attractions and remarkable sights all around the world. An opinion exists that the most convenient way of foreign culture acquaintance is through A special company with relevant specialization. I completely disagree with the above-mentioned statement due to the reasons described below in my essay.
Firstly, agencies prepare product with strict agenda and timetable with no opportunity to re-arrange and modify upon tourist interest. Excursions duration and rest periods are commonly created rigorously that leave low agility for a person to experience surrounding atmosphere. The same applies to eating out as dinning location and dishes are often dictated by organizers who might choose unattractive venues. For example, in 2018 my mother who is fond of oil painting was compelled to visit castles and churches in Paris through organized trip. Thus, inability to fully pursue our heart’s desire during the long-awaited journey might result in blurred impression and frustration.
Secondly , compared to individual tours, group ones result in higher costs due to additional expenses for various facilities which are included in the agenda by default. The main money consuming issue is transport services which imply increased cost for a driver, petrol, parking and a potential ticket for overspeeding that a customer cannot regulate. Though services of authorized docent are often of a highest quality, presented in all famous sights electronic audio analogue is as full-fledged and are much cheaper. For example, my sister calculated that anniversary tour to London in 2019 would cost 20% less for exact same amenities if were executed independently. Hence, budget oriented individuals might experience less value of purchased services formed by a third party operator as mandatory costs are incorporated in to margins.
Taking into account all mentioned above, I’m convinced that the activities arranged by tour guides result to be less fascination as they usually are not financially viable and leave no room for improvisation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, third, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57632398754 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97407234016 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679127725857 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2559031263 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 127.857142857 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0418639261508 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0131238557691 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0185036274976 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0291201927287 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203356622164 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.73 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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