In Modern times, Vast number of people are owning a car. I accept that this is leading to large cases of traffic congestion in various towns and districts through out the universe. If adequate measures are taken by the Governing authority then their usage can be reduced to a certain extent.
Count of Four- Wheeler vehicles raised enormously in the recent days due to the fact that they are easily available with various Equated Monthly Deposits methods. Similarly, Manufacturing companies are attracting their customers with various offers. Along with this, Individuals are also addicted to a luxurious life ;Therefore, Most of them are utilizing four or more sitting vehicles in every situations where only one or two person are traveling through it.Hence, All the above consequences led to sky-rocketing sales of cars; which in turn is leading to large amount of road blocks.
Governments can play a principle role in declining the blockage of way through vehicles. Firstly, Educating the population about issues related to traffic and heath issues associated with it. Such as, respiratory disorders, Back Pain, So on. Secondly, attracting the public by enhancing features of various government handling transportation services. On the other hand, Imposing taxes in situations where car is utilized only for show-off.
To recapitulate; Nevertheless, Bigger vehicles are playing a major role in traffic problems. Accordingly, If proper public vehicles are introduced. This problem can be plummeted to a greater degree.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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In Modern times, Vast number of people are owning a car. I accept that this is leading to...
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...t that this is leading to large cases of traffic congestion in various towns and ...
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...ngestion in various towns and districts through out the universe. If adequate measures are ...
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...and districts through out the universe. If adequate measures are taken by the Gove...
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...res are taken by the Governing authority then their usage can be reduced to a cer...
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... can be reduced to a certain extent. Count of Four- Wheeler vehicles raised e...
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...t they are easily available with various Equated Monthly Deposits methods. Simila...
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...g four or more sitting vehicles in every situations where only one or two person ...
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...every situations where only one or two person are traveling through it.Hence, All the...
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... or two person are traveling through it.Hence, All the above consequences led to sky-...
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...ding to large amount of road blocks. Governments can play a principle role in...
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...ndly, attracting the public by enhancing features of various government handling ...
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...evertheless, Bigger vehicles are playing a major role in traffic problems. Accor...
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...er vehicles are playing a major role in traffic problems. Accordingly, If proper...
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...uced. This problem can be plummeted to a greater degree.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, hence, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, therefore, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45991561181 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95200681084 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675105485232 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 70.5088285108 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4285714286 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127299093342 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426379145809 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311921325896 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798067071216 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455083604236 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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