In today's world, having our own car is one of the desires of every individual. To fulfill their dreams, everyone is buying cars so that they can have an easy mode of transportation. This has led to a rapid increase in car ownership over the past thirty years to an extent that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam.
Increase in car ownership has led to a significant increase in traffic as well. Because of this issue, we now require 40 minutes to travel the same distance that was earlier been covered in 20-25 minutes. Also, lack of good public transport facilities is one of the factors that encourage citizens to buy cars. Even if there are adequate facilities for public transport, there is a major issue of safety and security of women. Hence, women prefer to travel in their own cars rather than public transport.
There are enumerable measures that the government can take to discourage people from using their cars. If public transport is improved and taxi service is easily accessible, people will surely prefer to use them rather than their own cars. Also, the taxi fares should be of reasonable amount. In Delhi, the government has started an 'odd-even' initiative. It means that for odd number of days of a month, only cars having odd numbers on their plates are allowed to be used for travelling. This measure has helped in reducing the traffic in the city of Delhi. Also, if train facilities are improved, people will use railway services for travelling long distances. This can help in reducing traffic on highways.
In conclusion, we can say that there has been a significant increase in traffic due to increase in car ownership. To tackle this problem, there are many measures that governments can take to discourage people from using their cars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80519480519 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56421985754 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50974025974 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9271114662 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.2222222222 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427626819788 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133581895107 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125772291987 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280796998854 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115316662995 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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