According to some statistics, children pay too much attention on tv programes instead of physical activities. In this essay, we might figure out some reasons which caused this situation and reveral solutions as well.
It is undeniable that children are spending on watching TV a remarkable time of a day. Perhap, there are some reasons why they do less physical activities and watch more tv programmes now. Generally speaking, media nowdays is much more attractive than in the past with variety of type. One of the main reasons is that producers have created a lot of fascinating shows on TV which attract children to stay on their chairs for a long time. For example, my little sister who have passion on romatic films could lay on her bed whole day to watch some series films like that. Another reason is that children do not have enough space to do their activitives because of regardless by adults. In many cases, lack of aids for children from governments who just focus on make profit from elder people leads to children feel boring with infrastructure in their areas..
The interesting point here is that people could encourage youngers with numerous methods. Apparently, parents and teachers actually can help children decrease their time alongside with tv by help them realise some negative impacts of watching too much tv and lack of exercises such as eye sight problems, losing of muscles. Additionally, parents should pay more attention on their children or give a strict timee to watch tv per day. Furthermore, school might create some outside activities in the weekend which gather children and give some games to play together.
In conclusion, the trend recently could raise some potential serious prolems when children do not as active as previous generations. Not only parents but also schools and other factors might help children comprehend their situation and get rid of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, apparently, but, furthermore, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05079365079 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63432006925 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593650793651 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5127679343 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.066666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222439142423 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802589335115 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030736487816 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134916840865 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369950682005 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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