In past ,Children depend upon their parents to take a minute decision also but nowadays teens are capable to have their own decision.Some people argue that youngster below 15 should be allowed to take their own selection without any disturbance from their guardians. I strongly agree with this statement because these days teens are capable enough to take their own decision and they are creative too which help them to gain the self confidence.
First of all,In today's world almost each and every child is able to take their own decision. Taking decision in young age help youngsters to gain confidence on them .Due to the help of modern technologies almost every child know the different stages of life which helps them to take the right action in required time.If child is given authority to take his/her own decision he/she can adapt to the society easily. for instance, one of famous young football player kelvin mabbape left his home when he was only 15 years old and now he plays football for France national team and well known club Paris Saint Germain
.Therefore,we can easily have a say that youngs in this generations are capable to take their own decision.
Secondly,In 21st generation many children are born creative .If teens are allowed to take their own decision they can easily gain confidence which will help them to adapt in the society easily.Many students in the high school create wow things to get attention of the teachers with their talents. For illustration, According to the article " THE NEW WORK TIMES" published in 2018 we can know that many students from the different part of world create ,discover many amazing devices which help human beings in their daily life.Thus, children nowadays can take their decisions themselves.
In nutshell, allowing children to make their own decision helps them to boost their confidence and will teach them to take responsibilities by themselves but this does not mean they should neglect their parents. In the end, a child is happy if he takes right decision at right time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99418604651 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52617449886 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540697674419 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.758248701 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 190.888888889 106.682146367 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.2222222222 20.7667163134 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378749671759 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179461604054 0.084324248473 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116402175405 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2351318961 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109465730089 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.0946893788 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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