Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements What measures can be taken to protect them

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As competition among companies becomes fiercer, consumers today may find themse...
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...cer, consumers today may find themselves bombarded with a barrage of advertisemen...
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...mbarded with a barrage of advertisements from businesses trying to promote their ...
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... from businesses trying to promote their products to the general public. In this ...
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...ying to promote their products to the general public. In this essay, I will demonstrate ho...
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... to the general public. In this essay, I will demonstrate how excessive exposure ...
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...ll demonstrate how excessive exposure to commercials may trigger impulse buying ...
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... commercials may trigger impulse buying before suggesting some of the ways in wh...
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...gger impulse buying before suggesting some of the ways in which governments can mitigat...
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...ore suggesting some of the ways in which governments can mitigate the detrimental...
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...governments can mitigate the detrimental impacts of advertising. The harms th...
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... The harms that advertisements may do to people are definite.The allure of the vi...
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...sements may do to people are definite.The allure of the vivid graphics and imag...
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...ple are definite.The allure of the vivid graphics and imageries often found in ad...
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...ics and imageries often found in adverts may sway customers to purchase the produ...
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... sway customers to purchase the products being promoted,even when they have no re...
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...o purchase the products being promoted,even when they have no real need for them....
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...ing promoted,even when they have no real need for them. This is reinforced by cel...
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...or them. This is reinforced by celebrity endorsements, which usually have a drama...
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...orsements, which usually have a dramatic influence on people wanting to imitate t...
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...uence on people wanting to imitate their idols. As a consequence, people who watc...
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.... As a consequence, people who watch too many advertisements generally end up wit...
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...any advertisements generally end up with items that they may eventually have to ...
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... items that they may eventually have to discard, resulting in a waste of money.T...
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... discard, resulting in a waste of money.The iPhone covers eing sold in Vietnam pe...
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...scard, resulting in a waste of money.The iPhone covers eing sold in Vietnam perfe...
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...ne covers eing sold in Vietnam perfectly exemplify this situation. Their adverts,...
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...ify this situation. Their adverts, which feature prominent pop stars, can be foun...
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...eature prominent pop stars, can be found positioned on the side panels of most we...
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...oned on the side panels of most websites in Vietnam. People who visit these pages...
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...tnam. People who visit these pages often cannon resist the urge to replace their ...
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...n resist the urge to replace their phone covers with the latest models and waste ...
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... covers with the latest models and waste money on a product that would be of litt...
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...ney on a product that would be of little value to them. In order to help cons...
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... In order to help consumers make more informed purchasing decisions,government...
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...ake more informed purchasing decisions,governments can adopt some of the following solut...
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...nformed purchasing decisions,governments can adopt some of the following solution...
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...asing decisions,governments can adopt some of the following solutions. First and foremo...
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...irst and foremost, they need to exercise censorship on all advertisements. Rigoro...
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...nsorship on all advertisements. Rigorous content check must be carried out prior ...
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...t check must be carried out prior to the publishing of a commercial to ensure the...
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...publishing of a commercial to ensure the description ofa product accurately refle...
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...tion ofa product accurately reflects its actual quality. In addition, there shoul...
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... quality. In addition, there should be a limit on the number of platforms on whic...
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...it on the number of platforms on which a company is permitted to market their p...
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...a company is permitted to market their products. This would effectively safegua...
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...oducts. This would effectively safeguard consumers against information overload a...
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...nsumers against information overload and help them avoid making wasteful purchase...
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... In conclusion, people who view too many advertisements may be lured into buying ...
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... advertisements may be lured into buying unnecessary things, and the proposed ste...
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...necessary things, and the proposed steps should be taken to mitigate this influen...
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...d be taken to mitigate this influence of advertising.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75925925926 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13950641558 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62037037037 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8893450104 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.538461538 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 48.0 4.38176352705 1095% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 52.0 5.01903807615 1036% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196017323078 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658784302426 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043785996338 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0351828808638 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469314123281 0.056905535591 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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