The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.
What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
At the present time, the problem faced by humanity through out the world is the rise in the world’s population. The number of population is growing exponentially in today’s world. Personally, I agree that the greatest problem faced by humanity is due to the over population which have been increasing rapidly day by day.
In present context, the highest number of population have created many problems for humanity. One of the greatest problem faced by people is the pollution. Similarly, the fertile land used for cultivation of crops have been used for the resident which as a result causes the shortage of food. In addition, to fulfil the requirement of growing population, people are destroying the forest which also have caused problems to wildlife. There are many causes that have contributed in population. One of the root cause is the crude birth rate is higher than the death rate. Similarly, other causes are in most part of the world people are unaware about the family planning. Moreover, there are religions such as Muslims who believe family planning is the crime. In addition, there is inequality in gender which have also contributed in population growth in most part of the world.
In conclusion, it is true that the world’s population have been increasing that have created many problems. The existence and survival of people is becoming difficult day by day. If the number goes increasing in this rate it will create great threat to humanity. From my point of view, government should conduct awareness program about family planning, gender equality and the problems that are caused by the population growth which helps to tackle these issues.
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...eople is becoming difficult day by day. If the number goes increasing in this rate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, similarly, so, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14181818182 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74009108855 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476363636364 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0645580002 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.375 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293669093001 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102434243444 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119708876445 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239198299922 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167314027857 0.056905535591 294% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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