The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.
What are the causes of this continued rise?
Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
In recent years, what is the reason behind the major greatest problem faced by each and every mankind, is due to rising the rate of world's population day-by-day. So, I,completely agree with the provided statement about the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity. Hence, this essay will explain the major causes of overpopulation and highlighting the effective reasons about my agreement.
First of all, a rapid growth of human population usually coincides with technological outbreaks. Since this revolution occurred in medical field, medical equipment are very developed and finally it resulted to provide the good effective medical treatment to the mankind. As a result of this, birth-rate is skyrocketed and form a human population in the world. Secondly, stable food supply is the major causes for overpopulation in different countries. Consequently, world has raised, now it has passed the point of approximately 8 billion.
On the other side, many major effective problems are occurring due to the world's population. Firstly, resources having limited uses for mankind. Therefore, overconsumption resulted due to overpopulation and also form a situation related to resource depletion. Furthermore, overpopulation also created the unemployment in different oriental countries like India and others. Moreover, the environment affected by the mankind, as it form an environmental degradation. According to the reports of UNESCO, in the last decade, oriental and Occidental countries faced 60% more problems in recent as compared to the decade before, in the reports also mentioned the reason behind this, only the overpopulation is responsible for various problems like unemployment and others.
To conclude this topic, the greatest problem faced by humanity would be reduced, if the continued rise in world's population can reduced by increasing the level of education and implementing the certain laws regarding controlling the population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69491525424 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20980256704 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549152542373 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8951919596 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328732552662 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967360570447 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109951455832 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217496643744 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114703743603 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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