Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
One of many benefits of advanced technology is that it provides identical products and services to any individual globally. In my opinion, this advancement brings higher standard of living to humanity in many aspects, such as healthcare and transportation.
First, public health in rural area can be improved by using high quality products, including medicines and items of medical equipment, from other developed countries. Shipping those commodities across the world within a short period can save many people lifes who are in need. For instance, my uncle was suffered from diabetes, and he needed a medicine that could not be produced in Thailand, his homeland. Therefore doctor had to order that pill from USA in order to protect my uncle’s life. Clearly, international trade is definitely beneficial to people healthcare, especially in un-urban countries.
Second, some kinds of transport, for example car and airplane, even though only few regions can make them, are being used virtually everywhere in the world. For instance, Toyota, one of low cost car manufacturing companies, is based its production in few countries, but its ability to distribute the car across the continents enables people to purchase its car almost anywhere in the world, bringing comfortableness for human being because of its affordable price that any typical person can reach.
In conclusion, offering the ability to equally access to any product that human need, especially drugs and vehicles, is a valuable progress that makes the world better, and although it will forms similarity over the world, it should be continued and expanded more and more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'valuable progress'.
Suggestion: valuable progress
...need, especially drugs and vehicles, is a valuable progress that makes the world better, and althou...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'form'
Suggestion: form
... the world better, and although it will forms similarity over the world, it should be...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.279461279461 0.247107183377 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.124579124579 0.155533422707 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0976430976431 0.0946595960268 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.043771043771 0.0501214627716 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.043771043771 0.0437548338989 100% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121212121212 0.122226691241 99% => OK
Participles: 0.047138047138 0.0403226058552 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.90569721081 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.030303030303 0.0326793684256 93% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0572390572391 0.0861772015684 66% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.023569023569 0.021408717616 110% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.016835016835 0.011925033212 141% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1649.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 259.0 316.048096192 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.3667953668 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.413127413127 0.374742101984 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.320463320463 0.28420135186 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.262548262548 0.203846283523 129% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.169884169884 0.137316102897 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90569721081 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.037074148 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660231660232 0.56093040696 118% => OK
Word variations: 77.1212027532 60.7387585426 127% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0891783567 62% => OK
Sentence length: 25.9 20.7743622355 125% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.918138303 49.517814964 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.9 127.492653851 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.7743622355 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 0.814263465372 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 57.9463320463 49.1944974215 118% => OK
Elegance: 2.11111111111 1.69124875643 125% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312861732174 0.332605444948 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0939225472985 0.102741220458 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0728577178598 0.0668466124924 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.600042142898 0.534860350844 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.20015610373 0.148594505496 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122084865254 0.134430193775 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626154450455 0.0742795772207 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.222231160083 0.324371583561 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0127904830743 0.0638462369009 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1922661174 0.228012699653 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504175588598 0.058150111329 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.