Every country always has the characteristic in the production of the resources. Many scientists believe that in term about different climate (tropic, sub-tropic, and Antarctic) the countries have special products. However, in the last decades, many countries have the capability to self-supporting their own need in which both parties have their reason whether this situation would bring to the advantage or deteriorate to its country.
To begin with, the superpower country can be achieved when the number of import has been stopped. This competition has been worked since the revelation of technology. Furthermore, if the country can manage itself, its Kurs value will increase among other countries Kurs. For example, starting in 2000th, Indonesia has stopped to import the rice product or any other main products. This condition will affect the robustness of rupiah Kurs.
On the other hand, the self-supporting country will confess that the country is not only convenience but also that they don't obtain to other country products. But there are several explanations that this condition will bring to the side effect. Firstly, in this world, we know that the most superpower country in the world is America and Rusia. Either America and Rusia can provide and supply their main products such as food, energy, and technology. These countries have been got a monopoly for the product in the world. They can manage the world economy because they have surplus resources. But, different from Venezuela, the most significant product is oil and gas but after the invention of shale fossil by America, this country has an effect which the price of oil and gas is dropped. Secondly, there will be no corporation in each country that will start the cold war.
In conclusion, self-supporting countries will provide a comfort zone for them. But this condition will be finished by the bad relationship between countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...not only convenience but also that they dont obtain to other country products. But t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25407166124 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79288182017 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537459283388 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7415247523 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6111111111 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153340263679 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056429941302 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323812759554 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090860708127 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415473495885 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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