This fact cannot be denied that with the development and advancement in every sector like technology, education, medicine, etc. All nations are also facing many threats in terms of environment, education and overpopulation at high rate. This essay will discuss the problems faced by my country in next decade with some viable ways to curb it.
There are plethora of dangers people will face but the chief among of them is overpopulation. India has become the second highest country of overpopulation. Due to this people has to face more problems like job and house. Hence, people become unemployed and frustrated. To overcome their stress, they will start taking drugs where they use their positive energy in wrong direction like robbery, murder for their survival.
Moreover there will be contamination of environment from the emission of air from traffic, factories and so on. Also, there is disposal of waste from factories in the water bodies which leads to many health problems like heart attack, asthma, etc. Overall, it impairs the quality of life and reduces its expectancy. Furthermore, the other major concern is non availability for non renewable resources for future which will lead to stagnation in business. Therefore, it will raise inflation and economy of whole nation will be stuck.
There are some solutions through which this problem can be reduced. Firstly there must be international organisation which monitors the usage of non renewable of all nations so that these can be retained for future generation. Masses also put efforts to save the environment like use car pooling, energy saving products, recyable products and reduces garbage. Authorities also put restrictions on the emission of air and waster disposal from factories and serve punishment.
In conclusion, this problem can be eradicated if decisions about solving problem taken at international level and implemented at national and individual level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37908496732 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86737471474 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591503267974 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7539854718 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4444444444 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280410832041 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822601689538 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628993714172 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148989585303 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259973442912 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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