Some people believe that the creative artists should be given complete freedom to express their views and should not be restricted by the government. I disagree with the view that the artists should not be restricted by government in certain areas because it can create instability in society.
Admittedly, the innovative and intelligent artists are the backbone of the society. They contribute to enrich the people by their paintings, writing, documentaries and movies. The indispensable artists are known to think out of the box, that ordinary person cannot imagine. Like Leonardo da Vinci painted the aeroplane long before it came into existence. Different artists serve the society in distinct ways like a painter preserves the heritage of a country, a writer catches the moment of history in his writing and a photographer captures a precious image in his camera. The stage at which humanity has reached at this moment from the stone ages is largely because of the expression of views by the innovative artists.
On the other hand, the artist should not express his views in negative ways about a particular religion, race or creed due to the fact that it can hurt masses and could lead to instability in a society. The piece of art containing overwhelmingly vulgarity, violence or horror should be censored by the government. Adult people have the sense to distinguish between good and bad but children can be easily misled by it.
To sum up, the artist should be given freedom to express their views provided that it should not hurt the feelings of people or deteriorate the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07279693487 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74943126727 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544061302682 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6457506999 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27415056683 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102164698594 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103355242125 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198948690983 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106309725908 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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