It is said that at the same time illegal activities in most countries are increasing particularly among youngsters. The causes of this appear to be focused in many fields, and a number of solutions also appear to be possible.
Perhaps the major factor responsible for this trend is an economic aspect which can be considered like poverty and unemployment. It does not seem a secret that unsustainable economic situation in a country can cause poorness in families that involving person in criminal activities. For instance, this painful lesson currently we can see in the USA where due to family ’s inability to provide the education to children in school or university can lead to criminal thinking of a child. Another cause is lack of employment opportunities which can bring about criminal activities among unemployed, meaning that person who has no capacity to life support and run his household try to solve these issues by finding illegal chance to finance his living.
Turning to a possible solution, an obvious but not straightforward step would be to sustain an economic growth. A first remedy might be for increasing opportunities for employment throughout encouragement a business and boosting the labor market. If we took these steps it would involve people to work that allow being fallen crime rate. Another way to solve one of the causes of this issue is reducing poverty by using proper taxation tools with guaranteed fair implementation. If money were distributed equally it would not be turbulence inside the country and all young people are receiving the same education from which it follows that they would not have to join in criminal networks.
In summary, the factors of poverty and unemployment appear to be the main causes.
- Marketing and promotion is the key to successful business. To what extent do you agree? 61
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- Some people think men and women have different natural abilities that make them suitable for different types of work. Others, however, believe that both men and women can be equally suited to do any type of work. Discuss both views and give your own opini 67
- some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion. 73
- The following appeared in a report presented for discussion at a meeting of the directors of a company that manufactures parts for heavy machinery:“The falling revenues that the company is experiencing coincide with delays in manufacturing. These delays 79
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... opportunities for employment throughout encouragement a business and boosting la...
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...t a business and boosting labor market. If we took these steps it would involve pe...
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...mployment appear to be the main causes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for instance, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19217081851 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96144857842 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601423487544 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.825227126 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.583333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289117634638 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103336934448 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671439169855 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181444814233 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761332403199 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.