Crime rates are increasing at an alarming level. What are the causes of this problem?
Crimes have long been a nerve-racking hassle not only for the government but also for the whole society to seek for a resolution. It is undoubtedly true that many nations are witnessing a drastic rise in the crime rate. This increasing is resulted from several causes
The first thing to mention as one of the most important cause is the poor legal sanctions. There seems to be some evidence that locking people in institution does not reduce crime rate. By way of illustration, a lot of offender allegedly went to jail intentionally so they can have the infamous to enter the criminal organizations. Not only does it fail to act as a deterrent, the prison does very little to help convict readjust to life back in the community after they have served their time. The reputation of their background is prevented them from getting a job to earn for living. Furthermore, the offender's children and spouse may took the same prejudice. Consequently, many teenagers took part in their parent's path and became a juvenile criminal
In the second place, there is every likelihood that the surroundings play an important role in forming a criminal.Today there are still many slums where criminals reside. Child whose parent is guilty is reportedly more likely to get involve in social catastrophes as a result of living among gamblers, drug dealers or even murders, to mention but a few. Beside the family, it would seem that schools should take the responsibility of sharpening an offender. Numerous of juvenile criminals is supposedly to be a bully when they were student. The lack of attention from teachers and parents , especially during the pupil's puberty, make the defiant students more vulnerable to become a henchman for hardened criminal
To sum up, the rise in crime rate may due to a variety of reasons including the low severe punishments and vice enclosing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, still, as a result, to sum up, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00638977636 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88647494288 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626198083067 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9619629084 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.538461538 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127648122024 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421238437517 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525074951155 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846690206138 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546241979218 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.