A significant portion of the world’s forests is being deforested by human activity, causing myriad serious environmental damage. This essay intends to analyse some solutions to this predicament and suggests some ways to ameliorate the situation.
In recent years, as the world population increases, the demand for food also shows the same trend. In accordance with this purpose, people cut or clear forested areas to make way for agriculture or grazing, thereby deforestation occurs. For example, palm trees used in the production of palm oil are market that is in high demand due to their high productivity, because they occupy a relatively small place and produce oils with many fractions. The growth of the global palm oil market is increasing the damage to tropical areas, especially the Amazon basin, day by day. The attempts to intercept usage should include the adoption of people to sustainable farming practices or the use of new agricultural technologies and crops, thus the need for more land might be diminished.
Furthermore, it is indisputable fact that climate change continues as well as its effects on terrestrial and aquatic. Trees defend the environment from greenhouse gases caused by human activities by absorbing carbon dioxide. In addition, agricultural lands have higher soil and air temperatures in comparison to forests. Deforestation deteriorates this situation by affecting the way water vapor forms which can reduce rainfall. It can be suggested as a solution that replanting trees in cut areas can enhance the existing situations from wildlife to soils and water systems.
To conclude, for keeping safe the future of the planet and therefore of human life, forests must also be protected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36029411765 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97341704274 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0402980182 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.153846154 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199580001068 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638134833648 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492379904842 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109860390148 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253567370478 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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