Doing an enjoyable activity, a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree?
The modern era has seen many changes with the necessary groundwork that was laid in the past century of technology advancement. The current topic of that a youngster can grow the good expertise by doing entertaining activities are more effective than reading can be further explained through careful considerations which will intimately evaluate the topic. There are opposing views on every stance, this topic is no different. I would like to put forth the case that will provide a detailed account in the upcoming paragraphs.
To embark with, there are myriad of reasons in favour of my stance. The most conspicuous one is that there are plethora of activities by which a child can develop their skills like playing, singing and dancing many other also. It can be further started with great degree of evaluation that by playing children can learn countless things like the team work, cooperation with others, techniques to win the match. To be more precise, by doing enjoyable activities the youngsters can not only expand their expertise as well as, they can learn many things. For instance, a recently survey was conducted in which 70% of children can develop their better skills by doing entertaining activities.
However, the sinister side of this issue is that reading is also good thing by which a child can develop their skills and more creative. Additionally, it can be further supported that by doing reading one can improve their reading and came to know about new words which can help them by various ways. Moreover, children can easily expand their ideas by doing reading.
In the view of arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite having some concerns the role of enjoyable activities is instrumental indeed. Notwithstanding, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...playing, singing and dancing many other also. It can be further started with great d...
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Line 5, column 567, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('recently') instead an adjective, or a noun ('survey') instead of another adjective.
...ey can learn many things. For instance, a recently survey was conducted in which 70% of children ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16554054054 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.742159202 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8545839894 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.214285714 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25025048546 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859257536091 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756228699779 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14485006379 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761310108744 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.