It is undoubtedly the case that earth is been flooded with waste materials like polythene bags and othe kind of rubbish materials which is also effecting the mankind adversely .In this essay ,I m going to examine the possible reasons for this trend and suggest some of the proactive measures that authorities could improvement mend the Effect on the society
The first step is to understand why this Issue is becoming a global concern .we are agree with the that heaps of waste material on the earth,s surface are increasing at an alarming rate.Broadly speaking,there are three main reasons for this.The first and foremost reason Is the setting up of an industrial revolution.With the introduction of modernization ,the people are becoming more demanding. To meet those demands of the people industries are being set up which however has a great influence on the earth as the waste materials released by the industries is indispensable .Apart from that nowadays population is also increasing rapidly.This increment in population has a great impact on environment ,people are ruining their environment by themselves. They are showing a casual attitute towards the environment as they throw rubbish materials in open fiels which often result,s in heap,s of garbage.Last but not the least is that people are becoming materialistic nowaday,s.
There is almost certainly no ine solution to this problem given the complexity of its causes,however no option has to be to Do conselling of the people.It would also be possible by waste management .The best epitome of this is the implementation of swacch bharat abhayan by prime minister of India On 2 of october.The initiative of this law was to reducs the level of garbage or for the betterment of the society
In conclusion ,there are variety of different factors that have led to make this problem worser while it may not be possible to find a complete solution of this .This could probaby solved by spreading awareness among the citizens regarding this problem .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, then, while, apart from, as to, broadly speaking, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11854103343 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01408386762 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 82.0 20.2975951904 404% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 219.055215642 49.4020404114 443% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 421.0 106.682146367 395% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 82.25 20.7667163134 396% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.75 7.06120827912 435% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276598556253 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135954653796 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872852032462 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169139665928 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275198299747 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.8 13.0946893788 334% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -11.75 50.2224549098 -23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.3 11.3001002004 312% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.6 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.59 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.8 10.1190380762 344% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 35.0 10.7795591182 325% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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