Nowadays, acquiring extraordinary skills among employees has become vitally important for the employers. Some people argue that social skills are not important as much to have a successful career. While others claim that earning good qualification with addition of gaining interpersonal skills is crucial for professional success. I believe that strong social skills could impact on the overall success of the employees in the job because it may help them to be confident and more comfortable with the clients. There are several factors and I would like to discuss two main reasons.
Firstly, building social skills could impact on the employees communication skills, they will be able to present product or services confidently to the customers and would understand their needs reliably. Secondly, learning soft skills improve the level of cohesiveness among the colleagues and it creates a healthy work environment to build trust and empathy in the company. Additionally, it also bring some comfort and way of connecting with each other in the work place to share ideas through informal events. For instance, workmates who are afraid to speak and antisocial could get intensive boost through participation in social gathering and getting an instant support from other members of the organization may build their motivation to achieve success in their work.
However, sometimes heavy burden of routine lifestyle and work make people feel tired and they avoid to join any social activities. Furthermore, this group events could lead to generate some conflicts and may cause damage in the company. In present situation, young employees do not want to spend so much time on this kind of social practices after work. It may also possible that office people are not interested to talk with people as they are antisocial or need alone time for relaxation.
To sum up, in my humble opinion, I agree that employers are more concerned about social skills of employees as it improvise their confidence and produce happy environment to do work with the teams to become assertive in their perspective job field. Furthermore, this could generate chaos sometimes and lead to destruction in the company but it could be resolve through proper planning and direction in organising such activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
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Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid joining'.
Suggestion: avoid joining
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29395604396 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81099003127 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563186813187 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5101236528 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.466666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2666666667 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29695685214 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100997712735 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873081608258 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183567004096 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107818996239 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.