Human activities have an influence on the environment in a plethora of different aspects. In addition to the impact concerning climate change, people also cause a great deal of types of pollution, directly affecting our habitat.
Air pollution is more and more serious in countless big cities that is the main explanation of outbursts of respiratory diseases or even lung cancer. Fossil fuel combustion in industrial work or exhaust fumes from transports still evacuate the large amount of air pollutants on a daily basis such as CO2. Afterward people’s health comes badly day by day because there aren’t any severe laws of protecting the fresh atmosphere.
The other rigorous issue that we are facing is water pollution. Industrial still hasn't been handled yet after evaluating the rivers, lakes as well as overusing of fertilizers and pesticides as the main conditions begin the water pollution circumstance at present. This problem doesn’t only influence the ecosystems and life of aquatic animal species that also sways to the people surrounding populations.
It is not only the government, each of us can give itself a hand to the habitat protection through basic action. Using the public transports or cycles instead of cars of some kinds will lessen the carbon dioxide emissions. And, in the same hand, restricting the fertilizers and pesticides will contribute to reducing the water pollution, these things also benefit our health. Every movement to decline energy consumption can be a positive impact on the air we breathe.
- Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 87
- For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world However nowadays people s values have changed and we tend to consider science technology and business more important than arts What do you think are the causes of this 87
- The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966 1986 and 2006 67
- Environmental problems such as pollution and aimatic variations are increasing nowadays The government have taken some measures at a global level But they got only few solutions Why is it so How can this problem be solved 56
- Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world However these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science technology and business Why do you think that is What could be done to encourage more pe 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, well, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26829268293 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86793731552 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674796747967 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.043920855 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0996680568158 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031345292833 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297689801073 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0515425390178 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026323104533 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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