Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Having a good daily diet with full nutrition is important to people healths. However, it is said that everyone should turn into vegetarian in order to reduce the amount of meat consumed. In my opinion, I disagree with this point of views for several reasons.
First, meat still plays a necessary role in keeping people in healthy mode. It is scientifically proven that animals fat is vital for building a strong structure for a number of organs in the body by providing a quantity of chemicals such as Calcium, Magnesium, etc. Furthermore, in some people's perspectives, having meat as part of the dishes could bring them the satisfaction when eating. They can feel the chewy and mouth watering tastes of the meat being cooked by different recipes with flexible flavours, which helps them find more joy in appreciation. Similarly, in several cultures, meat might be one of the main dished of the meals which should be appeared.
On the other hands, people should consider vegetables as an important nutrition supply. Eaters could absorb the same amount of vital vitamins and minerals as when they eat meat without feeling guilty for killing animals. They will feel uncertain what they did to the animals is right, but they don;t have the same feeling when picking vegetables to cook. Moreover, scientists recommend that eating more vegetables might lower the rate of health diseases include some age-related problems: cardiovascular, heart cancer, etc. fat in animals, on the opposite site, may cause these previous unhealthy problems.
In conclusion, people should balance the quantity of meat and vegetables eating in a daily meal so that they could limit the chance of being malnutrition. No one could restrict others to be vegetarian since that is human rights and freedom in choosing their everyday foods; but dietitians are recommended to fulfill as much as nutrition that their bodies need in order to be healthy enough.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, still, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08832807571 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70090134863 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586750788644 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5538636659 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.533333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199631411012 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639812380189 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416178653353 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121845684394 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206665819158 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.